雨景
我心愛的雨景也多著呀:
春夜夢回時窗前的淅瀝;
急雨點打上蕉葉的聲音;
霧一般拂著人臉的雨絲;
從電光中潑下來的雷雨——
但將雨時的天我最愛了。
它雖然是灰色的卻透明,
它蘊著一種無聲的期待。
並且從雲氣中,不知哪里,
飄來了一聲清脆的鳥啼。
(選自《草莽集》,開明書店1927年版)
【賞析】
陳夢家在《新月詩選》序中說,“朱湘詩,也是經過刻苦磨煉的”,“《雨景》一首在陰晦中啟示著他的意義。”
這是一首頗有韻味的寫景詩。詩的第一句總起全篇“我心愛的雨景也多著呀”,由此引出詩人對不同雨景的描寫。詩人交替地描寫春雨和夏雨:春雨淅瀝,夏雨豪放,像霧一般溫柔,像雷雨般潑辣。不是由春寫入夏,而是交替進行,這使詩的節奏時緩時急,給人以抑揚頓挫之感。至此,詩人並沒有接著寫秋雨綿綿、冬雨冰冷,而是話鋒一轉,“但將雨時的天我最愛了”,突如其來的轉折帶領讀者進入另一番境界。將雨時的天空是美好的,因為它孕育著詩人最心愛的雨。這是一種“無聲的期待”。在這安靜的雨前時刻,寂靜的雲氣中不知從哪里飄來了一聲清脆的鳥鳴,這是一幅讓人心馳神往的畫面。
這首詩句句寫景,行行抒情。雨景同時還含蘊著生活的種種體驗。生活不止有一種情調,它可能如春雨的溫柔纏綿,也可能像雷雨般震人心魄。它總能給人以不同的感受,喜歡雨、懂得品味雨的人,才真正是生活的智者。本詩格式整齊,采用無韻的自由體式,聲隨情轉,瀟灑自如。全詩的後兩句更讓人想起“鳥鳴山更幽”這一千古名句。整首詩筆調清新自然,匠心獨具,卻又不露一絲斧鑿的痕跡。
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